Fix English mistakes in some Markdown documents (#20274)

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/docs/content/page/index.en-us.md b/docs/content/page/index.en-us.md
index c3a43cd029..f9da78df51 100644
--- a/docs/content/page/index.en-us.md
+++ b/docs/content/page/index.en-us.md
@@ -17,9 +17,12 @@ blog post to read about the justification for a fork.
 ## Purpose
 
 The goal of this project is to provide the easiest, fastest, and most painless way of setting
-up a self-hosted Git service. With Go, this can be done with an independent binary distribution
-across all platforms and architectures that Go supports. This support includes Linux, macOS, and
-Windows, on architectures like amd64, i386, ARM, PowerPC, and others.
+up a self-hosted Git service.
+
+With Go, this can be done platform-independently across
+**all platforms** which Go supports, including Linux, macOS, and Windows,
+on x86, amd64, ARM and PowerPC architectures.
+You can try it out using [the online demo](https://try.gitea.io/).
 
 ## Features
 
@@ -268,8 +271,8 @@ Windows, on architectures like amd64, i386, ARM, PowerPC, and others.
 - Gitea should be run with a dedicated non-root system account on UNIX-type systems.
    - Note: Gitea manages the `~/.ssh/authorized_keys` file. Running Gitea as a regular user could break that user's ability to log in.
 - [Git](https://git-scm.com/) version 2.0.0 or later is required.
-   - [Git Large File Storage](https://git-lfs.github.com/) will be available if enabled when Git >= 2.1.2.
-   - Git commit-graph rendering will be enabled automatically when Git >= 2.18.
+   - [Git Large File Storage](https://git-lfs.github.com/) will be available if enabled and if your Git version is >= 2.1.2
+   - Git commit-graph rendering will be enabled automatically if your Git version is >= 2.18
 
 ## Browser Support